wow!! i enjoyed this comic a lot, and the drawings are beautiful. i really like all the lines and textures!
just a suggestion- would it be possible to have all the pages be spreads (i.e. combine the single pages to be a single image of two pages in the pdf as a spread), or have the two spread pages split up into two "pages" (without any white space between them, just have them be two images)? the way it's laid out right now makes it hard to read (pdf readers usually let me toggle to turn on a double page layout, and doing that makes the two spread pages look really awkward. (image attached)) i hope i've explained this in a way that makes sense, just trying to be helpful!
feel free to delete this comment if you already knew about or i guess let me know if you know a workaround? can't wait to read more of your work!!